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  • Deb O's user icon
    Deb O
    > Marinohashi

    さん、your music is so wonderful that it always makes me want to try some lyrics! Thank you for sharing your original music with us! Please, keep composing! You are very gifted! 🌷👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

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    Marinohashi
    Deb o san, thank you for your lyrics and song. So amazing!!
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    Deb O
    > Mona

    さん本当にありがとうね。So, you think I should leave it as it is now, right? I was afraid to use the words in japanese in a wrong way ... but if you say it is poetic, so maybe they are ok 🤗💕

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    Mona
    > Deb O

    I think the Japanese part sounds poetic, and at the same time, philosophical. Perhaps the selection of vocabulary may not sound very native, but thanks to that, the poem seems like to leave an amply room of imagination to the reader. It has got your charm, Deb O san :) I really like it✨

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    Deb O
    > moo

    さん、はい! 歌詞は、複数回生きるという考えを求めています。毎回異なる国。 毎回異なるイディオム。

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    moo
    フランス語、ポルトガル語、日本語ですか?
  • Deb O's user icon
    Deb O
    > Mona

    さん、ありがとう!🥰 日本語はどうですか。Does the Japanese Lyrics make sense? Please, tell me: how could it be improved?

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    Mona
    Muito interesante!!