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  • M. Franklin's user icon
    M. Franklin
    > black Swan

    hmm I see... I'm still working on it. Though Lowtide did a pretty good job with it :)

  • black Swan's user icon
    black Swan
    > M. Franklin

    so basically it's a revelation song . if u want to sing both sides try to ask a guy to sing the second part. if not anyone else would do. but I'm only good in sad songs at the moment. lol so if that person was heart broken because of that one sided love. i would be glad to help

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    M. Franklin
    > black Swan

    well my original thought was that it'd be about a relationship in general between two people. But that relationship, say even a friendship was one sided. The lyrics I have already would be from the point of view of the one realizing it was one sided. It could continue that way or go into the point of view the one that didn't realize how strongly the other one felt about that friendship...

  • black Swan's user icon
    black Swan
    > M. Franklin

    sure. I'll have to know which message or story you want to send through these lyrics. and I'll help as i can

  • M. Franklin's user icon
    M. Franklin
    > black Swan

    Thanks! Yeah I know, I'm a little stuck on what comes after. If you have any ideas.... :)

  • black Swan's user icon
    black Swan
    that was nice. short tho. i would have loved to hear more
  • M. Franklin's user icon
    M. Franklin
    > Lowtide

    thank you very much I really appreciate it :)

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    M. Franklin
    > *maru*

    thank you for your kind words as always maru! :)

  • Lowtide's user icon
    Lowtide
    Love it. Great song, great lyrics
  • *maru*'s user icon
    *maru*
    Wonderful 😊💕